Twinkling indulgence

let yourself be carried by the sway

The river flows
Hauling glitter with smoothness
Bringing shine to all the living

A sparkle like a dart in my eye pulls me into it's bracing pool
Stealing my any sense of gravity and constraint
Making me ooze with such ease and twist

The gleam infuses my tongue and my throat
Watering my mouth to my veins
It melts through my streams like warm mollasess
Slowing down all sense of time

It's whooshing sound knocks on my ear drums
Tingling my mind and my nerves
And drawing all my focus to music

I wash my hair with it's glitter shampoo

And paint my face till it twinkles

Resembling a universe of infinite stars 
Right here in my hands

Feeding my soul 

And satiating all that's around me.

Author's Note

Let me know if this makes you feel what i'm trying to portray!

Reviews

[Attentive_Ambience]

OH! I'm reminded of a fae universe! I adore this, especially all the glittering and twinkling. I felt like I was in some sort of fantasy scene ~ which is something I look for when I read fantasy. You have a way of introducing the imagery, while also involving the reader. Thanks for sharing! ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. They made the reader feel and understand every movement. Felt like dance to me. Wonderful use of words Sarah.
Coyote