down with my dreams

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A magnet to my bed,

Reviews

[Attentive_Ambience]

oddly abstract, yet poignant. I can feel some strength behind those words ~ also, very relatable. Thanks for sharing with me! ^^

[Fatima]

It's short but very powerful

[Black Jess]

Short but carries so many meanings and emotions, and I love these kind of writings !
I love the contradiction in the first stanza, and love the depth of the meaning, it's like you're having sleepless nights and trying to make your dreams become true though they are way too far from becoming true, thus you're in between, you feel so lost and confused, don't know how to get out of this situation that is holding you back down in the depth of your thoughts, your heart feels like falling like it doesn't stand up where it's supposed to be, you feel like something is pulling you down while you're trying to go up, so you're standing there, deep down, with your dreams in your hands trying to make it to the top so you can throw them in the wind and make them become true. So beautiful *-*
But here's a thing, imagine that there's a rub you can hold on and it will push you up, take you up to a world where you can realize your dreams, where you can sleep calmly and dream nice things and then in the morning wake up and realize what you've dreamt of last night. there's a bright side you only need to see it, and you can see it if you allow it ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork was wonderful and I liked your words and thoughts. Nice to read your work again Sarah.
Coyote

[Sarah's words]

So nice to hear from you Coyote, thanks for your feedback :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure Sarah and you are welcome.