Rock my world

together we make the rarest mineral, better than gold

the stone that keeps me grounded.

amethysts are your eyes.

lava in my heart,

pebbles in my throat.

mountaintop high, I feel.

crystal clear, when with you.

diamonds, oh dear you give me more than that.

you rock my world, love.

Author's Note

Let me know if you get the "rock" theme!

Reviews

[Alao Taiwo]

beautiful choice of words. i noticed the shape too.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words and photos/artwork. Your words alive and strong. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jes' Pi]

Hello.

This poesy is much better than the last one I read from you considering that you approached a new and more profound theme.

The signification I received from those verses is the depths of desperation, pain, fear, and richness. We have to plunge into darkness and torment to find the purest, rarest, precious stones. When humans taste the preciousness and the royalty, they begin to love desperation and sacrifice their souls to oblivion.

"you rock my world, love."

I found only two grammar mistakes, so I will correct them for you.
"amethysts are your eyes."
"mountaintop high, I feel."

Concluding, you should keep the ball rolling...
It's pleasing.

Good luck!