You rewrote this popular vision on poets, which is a very current thing but not very fresh. I like the fact that you used free verse, which is a current thing too. Of course, every piece of this poem is current and I will show my appreciation using the rating I will give you.
I identified only one grammar mistake: It's about the word "someones". It should have been written as "someone's".
Concluding, I think you recreated a good writing style. My advisement is that you should try more fresh themes or classical themes, they evolve you "fiercely"!
Good luck!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Jes! I appreciate your advisements and comments very much:) What are examples o.. read moreThank you very much, Jes! I appreciate your advisements and comments very much:) What are examples of classical or fresh themes?
6 Years Ago
My pleasure!
Well, in my opinion, most of the classical themes are about romance(for example,.. read moreMy pleasure!
Well, in my opinion, most of the classical themes are about romance(for example, the most classical one is the male who loves a female but the female doesn't feel the same).
And fresh themes, (subjectively, of course), (for example) are about morbid topics(for reasons). You can produce a fresh theme by finding an old, non-popular one and make it YOURS.
That's the secret.
I'm really glad that you are interested in the things I told you because most of the people just read reviews and don't care about the reader's advice.
I like to think that everyone is connected, somehow. The idea that everyone who ever lived has been a part of history, written down in some way, I like it. I also appreciate how you turned even the negative things that happen in the world into art that we can learn from.
Great poem
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you appreciated and understood the poem, it makes me very happy!!
You rewrote this popular vision on poets, which is a very current thing but not very fresh. I like the fact that you used free verse, which is a current thing too. Of course, every piece of this poem is current and I will show my appreciation using the rating I will give you.
I identified only one grammar mistake: It's about the word "someones". It should have been written as "someone's".
Concluding, I think you recreated a good writing style. My advisement is that you should try more fresh themes or classical themes, they evolve you "fiercely"!
Good luck!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Jes! I appreciate your advisements and comments very much:) What are examples o.. read moreThank you very much, Jes! I appreciate your advisements and comments very much:) What are examples of classical or fresh themes?
6 Years Ago
My pleasure!
Well, in my opinion, most of the classical themes are about romance(for example,.. read moreMy pleasure!
Well, in my opinion, most of the classical themes are about romance(for example, the most classical one is the male who loves a female but the female doesn't feel the same).
And fresh themes, (subjectively, of course), (for example) are about morbid topics(for reasons). You can produce a fresh theme by finding an old, non-popular one and make it YOURS.
That's the secret.
I'm really glad that you are interested in the things I told you because most of the people just read reviews and don't care about the reader's advice.
I agree Sarah. Poetry is in the all of us. Most people block the places to create. Hide the ability to sing, write or paint. I liked the positive energy of your thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Excellent poem! You bring together everybody's passion in one light and how we can all continue to grow from it. I admire the cohesion here. Keep it up :)
I hope my words can inspire and introduce new perspectives and ideas to the world!! I'd love to eventually start a movement using my words and art, and potentially with the help of others!!
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