Brick wall

love for something so simple

Brick wall

I am sitting next to a brick wall.

The brick wall of a coffee shop.

So aesthetic, it is. 

Dreaming of that wall in my one day apartment. 

Observing it, touching it, I begin taking note of it's features.

Rustic.

Firm, hard.

Shades of brown.

Layered.

Rough.

Perfectly, imperfect. 

All these features make me love it more.

The good and the bad.

Brick wall, you tought me something.

How to love something so simple, with each part of it's character. 

Author's Note

Yes, i know this is a random poem!! haha
Let me know if this makes any sense, i see it in my mind..

Reviews

[Thepensiveplayer]

This is an amazing piece of work. I love how easy you make it your idea realized and illustrated in the reader's mind. Sometimes as people we tend to make things more difficult than they have to be. Yet, being simple and straight to the point works the best. Keep up your wonderful work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I enjoyed your thoughts and I liked the photo. Thank you Sarah for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Elizabeth Mars]

Aw I love the heart warming, touch tone of your piece! The simplistic subject that was able to invoke a more complex feeling and hope, makes the poem so interesting! Beautifully done! :)

[Sarah's words]

Thank you so much, your feedback is much appreciated :))
I was scared talking about a wall was going to be too random haha!