Wonderful use of words and thoughts.
on the next full moon, you will see me.”
and to the sky I rise, completing the shape of the moon.
A piece of moon, I am.
and you?"
I liked the complete poem and I loved the above lines. Gentle and hopeful. Thank you Sarah for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Coyote!
It's so great to hear feedback! I LOVE all your work, especially l.. read moreThank you so much, Coyote!
It's so great to hear feedback! I LOVE all your work, especially lilac wine:)
I'd love to keep hearing your feedback!!
6 Years Ago
Keep writing and I will keep reading your work. Please send read request. You are welcome Sarah.
First off, another great poem and I don't think the format is messy because you write at your best when its the way you want it to be. As the moon you are your a part of a larger universe. :)
Wonderful use of words and thoughts.
on the next full moon, you will see me.”
and to the sky I rise, completing the shape of the moon.
A piece of moon, I am.
and you?"
I liked the complete poem and I loved the above lines. Gentle and hopeful. Thank you Sarah for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Coyote!
It's so great to hear feedback! I LOVE all your work, especially l.. read moreThank you so much, Coyote!
It's so great to hear feedback! I LOVE all your work, especially lilac wine:)
I'd love to keep hearing your feedback!!
6 Years Ago
Keep writing and I will keep reading your work. Please send read request. You are welcome Sarah.
I hope my words can inspire and introduce new perspectives and ideas to the world!! I'd love to eventually start a movement using my words and art, and potentially with the help of others!!
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