wake Up

Author's Note

How do you fix something that's already been broken pure smiles blinking into never ending shouldas/ pure time lines buried in brief time spans scraping up remedies to cure diseases from old bags of past tense phrases/
i wish my potent words and lyrics penetrated my weak performances giving them breeds of new life /
consciousness breathing in pleasing aromas of forgiveness like His Majesty...The Most High /
time is running out while we continue resenting each other/ overloading our back sides with heavy mass such as old aged bags/ we hate on our own reflections in the mirror /building make believe time machines inside our minds /
aching to live in the past instead of building up our immunities for this life's venom's biting and sucking at our conscience /
I'm here to remind you the gift of free will /
something given to us all by the Creator/
the only one who created this perfect cycle we call life nothing but a dream/
deaths side kick or homie /
we are all sleep walkers hallucinating without recovery unless we open our internal eyes
to forgive our arrogant reflections and move onto picking up the pieces that have been broken by finally forgiving ourselves and one another

Reviews

[Guilt]

I was unsure with the last piece I read, but now I'm certain. You're a rapper :)
This was better read at a fast pace, and I knew how to read it. This is awesome, I envy people that can do this. I've never had the courage to try, but it's great seeing someone else do it here :)

- Guilt

[wordplay29]

Hi Roy, , I'm glad u enjoyed my poem, but the reason why I wrote the poem in the wrong place is because my android phone wouldn't allow me to post it in the correct place...sorry

[roy mccarthy]

very wise words and advice,
true spoken word,but........
you wrote it in the wrong section!
authors note is where you leave a description of the poem,not the poem :)
awesome write regardless!