In The Still of The Night

In the still of the night

all matters of the heart

come to light

 

I smell the perfume

in your hair

as I lie here beside you

waiting for your caress

 

like a child

in a candy store

the flickering fire light

shows your shadow as a silhouette

my mouth watering my hands wet

 

and then you touch me

I explode inside my feelings

for you I could never hide

 

do you know how much

I love you

do you know how you make me feel

did you know I would die for you

if it was your will

 

yes baby! that's how I feel

after all these years

this is how you make me feel

 

just by the touch of your hand

• my heart you still command...

Reviews

[Kerra]

like a child
in a candy store
the flickering fire light
shows your shadow as a silhouette
my mouth watering my hands wet

love these lines so much, this is so wonderful

[Miss Sharon]

Brings back many happy memories of a long ago love. Beautifully written Ron. ~Sharon

[heavenscentgirl1]

OH MY, your words resonates deep down to my core and fills many hidden Crevices of my heart. THIS IS SUCH A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN PIECE THAT BRINGS BACK SO MANY MEMORIES OF LONG AGO. THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR WONDERFUL TALENT WITH US. TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF. 🙏 HSG 😇

[wordman]

thank you for the sweet review

[heavenscentgirl1]

It was my pleasure 👍

[John the Baptist]

A tender love piece here. The speaker is still enamored of the beloved one, even though they have been together for years. That all relationships should last so long and so well.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Weeping willow]

Beautiful emotions of love flow through these words, lovely write ;-]

[wordman]

thank you for the visit w/w

[Delmar Cooper]

Nothing subtle about this, just an expression of affection and quiet passion. Who needs more in this type of love poetry?

[wordman]

thank you mr cooper

[Ruth]

So serenely set wordman, the image accompanying the poetry is sublime too :) Beautifully composed...

[wordman]

thank you ruth

[Melinda McQueen]

What a beauty of a love poem! Nicely conveyed.

[wordman]

thank you very much