Without You

 

 

These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe i`m just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man...

Reviews

[FaeryQueen]

so powerful
i enjoyed this so much
you are gifted sir
thanks for sharing

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the energy and the drive in the words my friend.
"My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,
without you babe i`m just a drop in the sand,"
I did like the above lines. When someone make us crazy. We do need them. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[wordman]

thanks for the read my friend

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Corset]

I agree with Shelley, this would make a beautiful love song. I also agree, there are no others, can be no others, will not look at nor can be with no other when you love like this, and only those who have loved like this knows it. Warm bodies can not replace.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Shelley Warner]

Sounds like a special love song.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Sami Khalil]

I love how you write with passion and deep affection. Lines are beautiful from the beginning till the end. I guess you are also influenced by the beauty around you.

[wordman]

thanks sammi,appreciate your review

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure sir Wordman.

[Sami Khalil]

"can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.



My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,"

[Sami Khalil]

"my heart is blind.



No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,"

[.]

I read something Amazing! 🤗

[wordman]

thank you,and don`t let idiots run you off

[.]

Nevermind but I don't stay in a place full of them...I just found my safe place and developing my spirits. I just come over for a few buddies like you!

Lots of love!
Aurora

[wordman]

hope it works out for you

[.]

Yay! ...its working ☺🤗

I guess you're as romantic as you write.

Romance has always been my favourite genre although I cannot write such. I find them weird to myself after writing. Haha. But when it's by somebody else, it's a "Wow!"

[wordman]

more so,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Fran Marie]

A lovely piece of devoted poetry
someone is obviously deeply
in love..so well written and nicely
expressed in poetic verse..

[wordman]

thank you fran

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You see,
true love paralyzes the mind,
there could never be another,
my heart is blind.

The above stanza was my favorite. It spoke volumes. Nice write. Tyfs

[wordman]

thank you for reading