Hand n Hand

Hand n Hand

A Poem by wordman


 



Hold me close

hold me tight

let`s never be alone

especially at night

 

be with me

forever and a day

promise me

you`ll alway`s stay

 

say you need me

say you alway`s will

tell me baby

just how you feel

 

lets walk through

life hand in hand

pull me up close

tell me i`m your man

 

say you will alway`s love me

and i will alway`s be your man

as we take on this life

hand in hand...

© 2020 wordman


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Who needs ten dollar words when the beauty of love shines through as it does in this beautiful write! ~Sharon

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

hey sharon,thanks for the visit
I marvel at how simple you keep your words, it doesn't look very ostentatious and unnecessarily pompous, which I am guilty of sometimes, and this profound perceptibility is what makes it pierce through the heart. They just pass through into your mind and no linguistic filter acts to interpret what is just being said, like there's no filter when we perceive honesty. Great work, friend :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you,i write poetry like a song,no ten dollar words
Rhyming love poetry is always something that I look forward to reading and here is an example of that kind of poetry. Simply it flows to its conclusion of commitment hand in hand and they move happily towards a golden sunset. While this is the ideal kind of love and not always possible, we all can taste a bit of that dream in your poetry here. So keep it up.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you sabrina for the visit
Beautifully written. I like the endearment in tour words and the repetition. Tyfs

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you for reading
Nice, this is a love song for sure, I really love it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you for dropping by
Insight "MH"

4 Years Ago

My pleasure!
This reads like a love song with its romantic rhyming flavours. Love the song and the picture as well Ron!

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you john
I agree with Ladysue....it's very lyrical, with your heart pinned to your sleeve and making your wishes and hopes well known. Hopefully she takes your hand. Lovely words, Wordman.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
This has the makings of a song. That is how it read to me like music. The words were so beautiful. enjoyed the read..

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you for the visit

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wordman

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