Hand n Hand

 

Hold me close

hold me tight

let`s never be alone

especially at night

 

be with me

forever and a day

promise me

you`ll alway`s stay

 

say you need me

say you alway`s will

tell me baby

just how you feel

 

lets walk through

life hand in hand

pull me up close

tell me i`m your man

 

say you will alway`s love me

and i will alway`s be your man

as we take on this life

hand in hand...

Reviews

[Ruth]

Taking life on in such a way is always a wonderful thing...beautifully emotive wordman :)

[wordman]

thank you ruth

[dw817]

Damn if this doesn't need music accompaniment. Very nicely worded, WM.
Rating: 100/100

[wordman]

thanks,one day i will try to make some songs to my poetry

[Lea Sheryn]

Beautiful and sweet! It's a lovely walk.

[wordman]

and i thank you again

[Lea Sheryn]

You'e welcome...again

[X]

ohhhh....this is so sweet simple and honest--adorable...can be a lovely song!

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Jags]

This is so beautiful...just loved it!

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Just Kim]

Such a beautiful and wonderful write

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Einstein Noodle]

i love it when a poem gives men some credit for being other than cads, liars and users ;) very romantic .. and in the words of Percy Sledge ... https://youtu.be/7lp7FtJXp7k
in this case .. the woman is a lucky girl says i! ;)
E.

[wordman]

you are right e we`re not all bad,lol thanks

[Bonnie Paige]

This whole thing picture, song and your words are so perfect. What a beautiful way to say let's be together forever.
Once again I forgot how to put pictures with my poems if you remind me I promise to print it out so I don't have to bother you again.
Great poem, sort of like something I'd write only didn't think of it.

[wordman]

no bother bonnie,,thank you on you tube right click on the video click on the 3 rd line copy it then paste to your poem

[wordman]

lol,you can alway`s ad on

[Judyf]

Your poem is lovely

[wordman]

thank you bonnie