If i were a carpenter

If i were a carpenter

A Poem by wordman



Life without you,

i wouldn`t understand if,

you wasn`t my lady,

and i wasn`t your man.

 

my life wouldn`t be the same,

without you,

but the world,

wouldn`t either

 

you take my breath away,

you sooth my soul,

when we`re apart

my heart is cold.

 

one day,

i will build a cabin,

in the sky

where eagles soar

and we never die.

 

My lips are sweet,

my love is true,

and i give it all,

all to you...

 

© 2020 wordman


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I always admire the sincerity, humility and simple tone of your poems. I can hear Alan Jackson or one of the true country artists singing this in a dim concert hall, just his voice, a guitar and a white halo around his wood stool. Sure, Elton John, but I'd prefer the country version of this one. Another enjoyable work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you,i like allen jackson to



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When I start read it you gonna build cabin I was expecting it will be in the woods. But no you gonna build at the sky that's quite highest quest. I really like this one full of love and longing open honest confession in true poetry well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
This is such a lovely declaration
of love and caring thoughts for
that special someone in
ones life

beautifully penned

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

than you fran,marie

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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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