If i were a carpenter

Life without you,

i wouldn`t understand if,

you wasn`t my lady,

and i wasn`t your man.

 

my life wouldn`t be the same,

without you,

but the world,

wouldn`t either

 

you take my breath away,

you sooth my soul,

when we`re apart

my heart is cold.

 

one day,

i will build a cabin,

in the sky

where eagles soar

and we never die.

 

My lips are sweet,

my love is true,

and i give it all,

all to you...

 

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

I always admire the sincerity, humility and simple tone of your poems. I can hear Alan Jackson or one of the true country artists singing this in a dim concert hall, just his voice, a guitar and a white halo around his wood stool. Sure, Elton John, but I'd prefer the country version of this one. Another enjoyable work.

[wordman]

thank you,i like allen jackson to

[Sami Khalil]

Your poetry has always song quality to it. Simple, profound and romantic. You should be in Nashville signing contracts.

[wordman]

lol,i wish i was sammi,,thanks

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrr. You are welcome

[James Paranormal]

Very romantic, and capturing, the eagles in the sky, the visuals in this piece are classic, nice job!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Fay Slimm]

So tenderly romantic Ron - - a gem of a read.

[wordman]

thank you fay

[NotUsinganymore]

Beautiful poem, reminds me of the song Scarborough Fair. Lovely writing

[wordman]

thank you for the visit my friend

[Unspoken poet]

This is such a most lovely as well as beautiful well written write

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Miss Sharon]

So beautiful and romantic Ron! You write of love so well my friend. ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you sharon,good to see you

[sandra]

I've read some of your poetry. What a beautiful declaration of love they are. I enjoyed reading them.

[wordman]

thank you fo the visit and reviews

[Lale]

Beautiful poem.. You have a John Denver vibe.

[wordman]

i like john denver,thank you,good to see you back

[Lale]

Thank you, I hope you're doing fine. :)

[wordman]

i am o k,how are you doing

[Lale]

I am Ok, thank you for asking.. looking forward to reading good poems again

[wordman]

if i see any i will let you know

[Lale]

yes please, thank you :)

[Ellen Kolman]

Beautiful poem...you are always such a sweet man and that comes through in all of your poetry. ...Bravo!

[wordman]

thank you ellen for the visit