On Your Heart

 

  On your heart,

i will leave my print,

not a lot,

but just a hint .

 

You will think of me,

when the time is right,

lying in your bed,

on a summers night.

 

Or maybe i`ll come,

from a flickering light,

from a candle burning

inside your mind.  

 

Where i`ll be,

till the end of time,

tucked away in your heart

where we will never part...

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful and so romantic
as always my friend 😊

And I hope you're
doing well take care

[wordman]

thank you my friend

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome 👍 I heard
the news glad you're well I was
celebrating my birthday with family
but I send prayers with always my friend cheers

[wordman]

thank you,,need al i can get

[YouoweYoupay]

Soothing. Romantic. The dreamer in the poem does not mind one-sided love, as long as they can keep the memory of their beloved preserved like a rose in the folds of a book.

"Or maybe i`ll come,
from a flickering light,
from a candle burning
inside your mind. "

Never stop writing.

~Aysha

[wordman]

you are to kind,thanks

[kentuck14]

Wordy,
You sure are a romantic! I see no gibberish here!!! Or stammering for that matter.
Where is Hexon might I ask?

[wordman]

hixson is a suburb of chattanooga,tn thanks
the review is from the idiot troll david g demers,,aka david

[kentuck14]

Oh, I'll try and stay away from him.
T.

[Drake]

Reminds me of a little kid stammering gibberish.

[wordman]

reminds me of an idiot named s**t head demers

[aubreydiamond]

Can’t help but imagine this as song lyrics to something... very beautiful 🌺

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[MCS]

Sweet gentle words...
Well done!

[wordman]

thank you !

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, kind and loving words shared my friend. Love should be slow, easy and needed. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[wordman]

slow,easy and needed,i like that john,,,thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend. Nice words shared.

[Onlyme]

Beautiful poetry Ron, as always from the heart, mind and soul. That takes your spirit away to wonderment and pure bliss.

[wordman]

thank you dawn

[sette]

really a romantic and sentimental writing my friend..take care always

[wordman]

thank you sette

[redzone]

I am sure you left more than a "hint" on her heart with your poem Ron... maybe even won her heart as well... nicely penned love poem...

[wordman]

thank you for the visit my friend