On Your Heart

 

  On your heart,

i will leave my print,

not a lot,

but just a hint .

 

You will think of me,

when the time is right,

lying in your bed,

on a summers night.

 

Or maybe i`ll come,

from a flickering light,

from a candle burning

inside your mind.  

 

Where i`ll be,

till the end of time,

tucked away in your heart

where we will never part...

Reviews

[BESMASMILE]

Love and beauty can be traced on your words of heart..

[wordman]

thank you,appreciate the comment

[Rye]

such a wonderful and lovely write

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Sneh]

"On your heart,
i will leave my print,
not a lot,
but just a hint ."
This is lovely Ron. Your love is really passionate, specially your firm hold on it!
Young lovers are getting inspired.... :D

[wordman]

glad to be an inspiration shen,thank you

[Samuel Dickens]

So highly romantic this is, and accompanied by Elvis's unparalleled crooning. I love this song, too.

[wordman]

thank you sam

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'On your Heart'
wordman,
A romantic heart like yours is very special.
Simple words full of nuance of meaning are always apparent in your writing.
It does this heart good to be reminded of the fact that love does live
and we can all be reminded of it's presence when we read a poem like this one.
Above words in each stanza lead into the next in aweet natural ebb. I like that!
The end is just right:
"till the end of time,
tucked away in your heart,
and your soul,
where I can love you forevermore...
Blessings,
Kathy

[wordman]

thank you for your kind words

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Your very welcome Ron..straight from your soul as always.

[wordman]

the only way i can write kathy,
if you can`t feel it..don`t write it !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nicely romantic and quite apt given your recent time away from the cafe. Your coffee went cold but the 'server' stuck it in the microwave lol!

[wordman]

lol,thanks

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey Man I'd ask for a refund, I like my coffee fresh! Hope the new plumbing is in good order Ron?

[wordman]

i hope so to john

[Relic]

A romantic poem from a man with a healthy heart. :) Nice poem, Wordman. :)

[wordman]

thank you relic

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very sentimental write, with a lot of heart...and speaking of that...my thoughts and prayers your way, Wordman....good luck with the surgery...and get back to WC.
j.

[wordman]

thank you jacob

[Ted Kniffen]

The romance in your soul comes through in your words, Ron. Hopefully whoever it was written for understood what it meant to you.

A good write.

[wordman]

thank you ted,just a poem

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmmm very dreamy romantic sir! having the confidence in my lover that memories of me will be there forevermore is such a unique and creative angle ... really good stuff my friend .. and that pic is astounding ... haunting, meditative and wondrous all at the same time ... like your poem ;)
E.

[wordman]

thank you my friend