On Your Heart

 

  On your heart,

i will leave my print,

not a lot,

but just a hint .

 

You will think of me,

when the time is right,

lying in your bed,

on a summers night.

 

Or maybe i`ll come,

from a flickering light,

from a candle burning

inside your mind.  

 

Where i`ll be,

till the end of time,

tucked away in your heart

where we will never part...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"You will think of me,

when the time is right,

lying in your bed,

on a summers night."

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Wordman.

[DAH]

Nothing but sweet, loving words. Simply beautiful and easy on the heart.

Bravo!
DAH

[wordman]

thank you mr d a h ,i appreciate the visit

[DAH]

M pleasure!

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This sounds like a romantic song to me.
I felt the warm feeling, the love relayed and the mind of good hope longing to reconcile again.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Fay Slimm]

Only a warm romantic could write words such as these - gently assuring of love evermore would be many a lady's dream. Thanking you too for the wonderful number my friend.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit fay

[augustus]

From one Amateur writer to another, may I congratulate you on penning poetry that makes perfect sense.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[FJ Davis]

Love's devotion lyrically portrayed.
Well done, poet!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful romantic love it and the music

[wordman]

thank you julie

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

a very lovely read and romantic indeed, Nicely writing

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Fran Marie]

A lovely romantic write so well penned and expressed in poetic verse....nice work

[wordman]

thank you fran marie,appreciate your visit

[Chris Shaw]

Romantic thoughts expressed in a most poetic way. Very nicely done.

Chris

[wordman]

thank you chris

[Chris Shaw]

Came back for a second read. Even better.

[wordman]

people say that,thank you again