candle in the wind

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you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...

© 2018 wordman

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[goldenscar__]

omg! such a beautiful poem...

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[LazerRays]

This is beautiful poem :) I love how the words seem to glow and light up the whole page. They're emotion fill and reletivily smooth to read. :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[The dark Hydra]

But you still looooove me right?

[The dark Hydra]

Mommy daddy wont talk to me any more

[Amanda Trerotola]

I love the two lines, "your my day and your my night." Just fix "your" with "you're." :)

[wordman]

bad habit,i know better..thank you

[Amanda Trerotola]

It is okay, we all do it!

[wordman]

well i fixed it,thanks

[Onlyme]

Beautiful and so endearing romantic flowing words of undying love. That moves mountains and hearts and soul and minds.

[wordman]

thank you dawn

[Onlyme]

Ron your a true gentleman with a glorious big heart. bless you.

[wordman]

thank you dawn

[Onlyme]

my pleasure Ron.

[wordman]

happy valentines

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful- so happy u have a love to share so true- just beautiful🌹

[wordman]

glad you stopped by,,thanks

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure-you just made me giggle so to myself that I nearly choked- lol it’s my pleasure🌹

[wordman]

lol,didn`t mean to choke u

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes u did lol u have a death wish for me🤪

[wordman]

damn,you mean i could be a war lock,,hmmm

[Monica Taylor]

Beautiful writing, i love it

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[ROBIN-RAMBLES-ON]

I love this its divine its so much love and above all your words stand out line for line read my Persuasion of blue perfect 10

[wordman]

thank you,and i will

[ROBIN-RAMBLES-ON]

Thanks I am sorry about you getting deleted it was not intentional

[VLS]

This is sweet!

[wordman]

thank you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[ROBIN-RAMBLES-ON]

Your welcome

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Wordman ... your poem, “Candle in the Wind” is an expression of a love to light your way on paths of passion and persuasion. May your destiny remain a gift from heaven. truly, Pat

[wordman]

thank you pat