candle in the wind

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you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...

© 2018 wordman

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[Gee]

Wishful thinking or..?
Reads really well Wordman, any loved woman would like this written for her :)

[wordman]

thank you mr gee,looks like you guys are getting fowl weather

[Gee]

You're welcome.
Bad weather not here yet but by all accounts on the way.

[wordman]

42 here today and more rain

[Einstein Noodle]

so romantic ... sets me thoughts to dreaming sir! i think i would try something besides repeating night in V1 .. not sure what might do .. but ...just a thought ;)
i love the cliche's in V2 ... we know they don't always have the right effect but for me it really added to the emotions ... i can't help but feel a little envious for your couple Wordman ..so well done says i!
E.

[wordman]

thank you mr e

[Lilly]

Oh, how lovely! This reads easily and has a nice flow. The inspiration behind this love poem must be a wonderful person

[wordman]

thank you for the visit lilly

[Stephany]

Your description of being a romantic is truly found in your writing. That is a good thing

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Jade]

Oh so beautiful, Very well written too.

[wordman]

it just pours out,thank you for reading

[Jade]

not a problem sir wordman. lol

[NotUsinganymore]

Very beautiful love poem! it had a great flow!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[sette]

the words speak out loud... love can be an understatement or an overstatement but whatever the degree is... nothing else matters in this world but love

[wordman]

nothing else matters,,thank you

[AYVID N]

A happy and blissful feeling created here. Love is such an emotion! Never fails to bring joy. Great poem on love!

[wordman]

never fails to bring joy,,thank you

[AYVID N]

My pleasure, my friend.

[Relic]

Your big heart is bursting through your shirt wordman. Nice poem.

[wordman]

thank you relic

[Giulia King]

Aww! I'm having a love burst for this poem, haha. Loved reading it :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit