candle in the wind

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you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...

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[Kent Rawski]

good to feel loved and secure never let that candle go out for a golden glove boxer you can touch gently :)

[wordman]

thank you kent

[Falcon1]

Far fetched Ideas of love but beautiful Poetry Too!!!

[wordman]

thank you much

[Lea Sheryn]

Beautifully romantic! Your lovely poem carries a wonderful thought from beginning to end. I am captivated.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

quite the romantic write...in next to last stanza the "your" in the two lines should be "you're"
but alas...
to give oneself so completely to another...
that in itself is a dream come true.
j.

[wordman]

a bad habit of mine,but i repaired it,thanks for the visit jacob

[Wild Rose]

Lovely words you speak of
True love

[wordman]

thank you rose

[Miss Sharon]

Beautiful write as per your forte my friend! ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you sharon

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'candle in the wind'
wordman,
Recognizing and affirming another in thankfulness is very lovely, very beautiful. This poem was a meaningful way to relate something which cannot be taken for granted. Great example to read and enjoy.
Bless you much.
Kathy

[wordman]

thank you kathy,always a pleasure to hear from you

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Yes it was fun...and take care sir.

[wordman]

you to,,thanks,,,,,,,,,

[Sawdust]

glad that the candle of love was not extinguished in wind throughout the poem

[wordman]

it`s an eternal flame thank you the visit

[Paul Bell]

Sometimes you just want to say the words, write them down for all to see.
Think you've done it in style.

[wordman]

thank you mr bell

[Margie F]

Beautiful. Made my heart swoon. I'm sure it made her happy, too. Very sweet write.

[wordman]

thank you,just write from music mostly