candle in the wind

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you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...

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[Fabian G. Franklin]

That's about as good as it gets I believe, in poetry or life...finding that someone that completes us in a way we never thought possible and makes us the best us we could ever be. And not because of what they do but because of who they are. Beautiful sentiments here. I enjoyed.

[wordman]

thank you mr franklin,and i agree

[zainul]

I was drawn by the famous title of Elton John.Now,I understand that message of Elton John may be applied many ways.Very lovely write indeed.

[wordman]

thank you zainul

[Ruth]

Beautiful :) True dedication from the heart is a blessing to give and to receive, lovely piece wordman :)

[wordman]

thanks for the visit ruth

[jamie]

Reminds me of my first love. I still think about her everyday

[wordman]

yeah i guess we all walk down memory lane sometimes

[Dave Brown]

When you (er, I ) read your romantically inclined poetry, all done very soft and gently, I am surprised to find this coming from your boxing/contracting/hard knocks background.
Perhaps this is your way of stepping back from some of your rougher experiences.
Whatever, I don't really relate to romantic poetry for whatever reason, but I recognize and appreciate the gentle romantic work you have done as obviously, have the gazillions that have read and review your efforts
Quite impressive

[wordman]

thank you dave,we all have a soft side

[R.E. Ray]

Ah, the simplicity of love, in poetic form and the perfect image. Well captured and illustrated here, sir.

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Ahhh true love like this and the music and pic

[wordman]

well,im glad you liked it julie

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

This is a sweet write and ever so lovely, so nicely written

[wordman]

thank you kescha,i appreciate the review

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

not a problem sir....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This lyrical love poem sounds like it might be put to music although I would alter the title so as not to provoke the ire of Sir Elton lol!
Welcome back Ron!!

[wordman]

he loves the glamour of it,,thanks john