Blue Autumn

Autumn leaves,

a whisper of snow,

the warmth from the fire

as the red embers glow .

 

Night fall comes

in shades of gray and black

not a star shining

as the clouds push them back

 

I reminess

as the day goes by

our love reminds me

of the colors of the sky

 

Gray and black

not a star in sight

i knew our love was over

this very night ...

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Nicely conveyed with some beautiful imagery. Thank you.

Chris

[wordman]

thank you for reading my humble work

[Melissa]

This is beautiful. I think we all have autumn on the brain right now. I was just talking to someone about how autumn is such a romantic time and how lonely it can feel to watch cozy autumn couples if you are single. This poem captures that loneliness.

[wordman]

thank you melissa

[Najam Us Saher]

'Love was over this very night' before I read this line I enjoyed the vivid imagery of Autumn you made ending love sound brilliantly by the description. I really liked this very much. Thank you so much for sharing.

[wordman]

glad you liked it my friend

[¿]

Wordman, this shock at the last was a necessary?! Of course! That made me blow and had a great short read! Thanks for sharing :) G'morning! (As per my timing)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[¿]

Swagatam! :)

[wordman]

teaching me a new language

[¿]

Ahan! Swagatam means welcome in Bengali :)

[wordman]

thank you means thank you from the wordman

[¿]

Accepted! :)

[wordman]

smile,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[wordman]

swagatam,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[¿]

Dhonyobad! :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

beautiful poem love it
love the song too

[wordman]

thank you,which song the first or this one

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

i only saw one and listend to one

[wordman]

bobby goldsboro or ronnie milsap

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

ronnie i couldnt see or hear the other one

[wordman]

i started out with blue autumn by bobby goldsboro

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

didn't see it
ps thanks for your help I have added music to
my pipe dream poem thanks so much!

[wordman]

you`re welcome