Blue Autumn

Autumn leaves,

a whisper of snow,

the warmth from the fire

as the red embers glow .

 

Night fall comes

in shades of gray and black

not a star shining

as the clouds push them back

 

I reminess

as the day goes by

our love reminds me

of the colors of the sky

 

Gray and black

not a star in sight

i knew our love was over

this very night ...

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Wordman... there is a hint of autumn in the air... like riding colored horses at the Fair... with the Wind in your hair. The love of summer as flowers linger on the branches of our heart.... a gift to cherish always. truly, Pat

[wordman]

thank you pat,and yes there is

[Nipplegrinder]

Nice one, brother. I love Ronnie, too.

[wordman]

thanks,he is one of my favorite on country

[Tara Marie]

Wow is what comes to mind. Your words were put together so beautifully. But oh so sad. Colors black and gray with no light. Because the clouds pushed the stars away. I could feel the spoken but silent pain. Thanks for sharing your intimate thoughts. Thanks for letting us in. Take care until next time. Ta Ta for now.

Tara Marie :-)

[wordman]

thank you tara ,my intimate thoughts,i guess that`s what poetry is

[Sami Khalil]

As Fall approaches, I sense the falling away between the two, the falling of leaves and the color of blueness. Losing someone enhances the power of life and the power of the seasons. Some people see with their eyes while others with their heart. Amazing.

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Wordman.

[Samuel Dickens]

This puts me in an autumn kind of mood. There's beauty in falling leaves, but not in crumbling love. There is hope for both, however, as a new spring eventually comes.

[wordman]

you are right my friend,,thank you

[Lisa]

As I read the first few lines, I imagined your beautiful description. Seems as though autumn is beautiful but has a gloomy effect on nature and people. It's a beautiful poem.

[wordman]

i`m glad you enjoyed it

[Relic]

You express a loneliness in a poetic way I'm familiar with, Wordman. I love Autumn too.

Nice writing. :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit tim

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Oh the gloom of the end of something so bright beautiful and precious- when all colours drain away and the greyness chills the air- wondering how did something so wonderful become so wrong - sometimes the sky tells a million stories- nature never makes mistakes- wonderful words- deep and unique like you only know how🌹

[wordman]

you are much to kind,thank you kelly

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasures for treasures🌹

[wordman]

i guess you was off work this weekend

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

No I worked- I’m off tom- meant to be Monday as well but swooped day out for Wednesday as must take my daughter to enrol at college- no rest for wicked🌹

[wordman]

good luck,college i can remember my first day
have a nice day off tomorrow

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou - college going well- hope u are well🌹

[wordman]

i am fine,glad it went well for you

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[wordman]

:) .................

[Onlyme]

Wonderful imagery. beautifully expressed Ron.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Onlyme]

Great poem Ron. Expect nothing less from you. Wink.

[wordman]

i know , i am deemed the love writer,the romantic one,not sure i`m living up to it

[Onlyme]

Ron, you live up to it. Worrying about nothing now..

[wordman]

well i am going to post another one then

[Onlyme]

Glad to hear it.. Be looking out for it. 😜😉

[wordman]

lol,it`s up but i wont leave it on long

[Onlyme]

Hold on ... iam rushing to find it.... panting... running...... quickly.. puff puff.. bugger iam knackered...

[wordman]

lol,i will wait a few minutes

[Onlyme]

So you should its me.. joking... wink

[wordman]

yes,it`s you and thats why i waited,i posted it at my poetic side and post poems

[Onlyme]

See your a true sweetheart Ron. Bless you kind Sir. Hugs.