Frozen

 

When we first met

your heart was frozen

but we felt a spark

 

Your heart started to melt and thaw

our love started to bloom

as a beautiful spring day

as the ice melted away

 

You reached out to me

like a vine in bloom

the warmth of my heart

melted your soul

 

As I nurtured you

our passion started to grow

the love melted your heart

as we became one with nature

 

I touched you,like the sun

touches a flowering bud

I touched your soul

and our love grew like a flowering rose...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The ever growing exponentially in romance.

[wordman]

new place,new time daily..thank you

[Sami Khalil]

:::::::))))))))

[Onlyme]

From a stone heart, a flowering spirit grew. With love. As does your poem grows. Beautiful expressed. Touching and nicely done.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit dee

[Onlyme]

my pleasure. hugs

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful awakening of life and love. It is true, there is a warmth of love's touch, the presence of it brings the world into the summer of the soul.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[wredit.jordan]

This is so sweet and beautiful. The words flowed well and I loved the imagery.

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Veronica Parker]

I don't read a lot of love poems, but every now and then one creeps in and melts me.

[wordman]

i`m glad it snuck in on you,thank you

[Moonie]

You used some very nice metaphors here...enjoyed it.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Laurierose]

This was truly intimate. There's no touch like the one of the sun, such a sweet star. If nothing else, that'll do the trick to help thaw even the most stone cold of hearts. Breathtaking metaphors. Great read.

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Zoya]

Beautiful comparisons all through the poem. Mesmerising!

[wordman]

thank you zoe

[Zoya]

No problem

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful to be able to touch someone that way and have such an affect on them- that’s what it’s all about it’s all in the touch speaks a thousand words- and then there’s the kiss now.. that’s another story- wonderful words🌹

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure is mine🌹

[wordman]

is that a promise

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Of course ...y not...lol🌹

[mou]

It's very sweet and written with so much gentle care. True, a beautiful thing holds its value with a fine remembrance only.
mou

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[mou]

my pleasure :)