Frozen

 

When we first met

your heart was frozen

but we felt a spark

 

Your heart started to melt and thaw

our love started to bloom

as a beautiful spring day

as the ice melted away

 

You reached out to me

like a vine in bloom

the warmth of my heart

melted your soul

 

As I nurtured you

our passion started to grow

the love melted your heart

as we became one with nature

 

I touched you,like the sun

touches a flowering bud

I touched your soul

and our love grew like a flowering rose...

Reviews

[Neville]

That sounds very much like love for ya.... congratulations......... N

[wordman]

just a poem,,thanks

[Neville]

pleasure....

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

wow love this a lot
you havea way with words

[wordman]

thank you julie

[θεά]

Very romantic wordman! Touches a chord for those who know what you are getting at. Nicely worded.

[wordman]

and i thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful to see a miracle.
"I touched you,like the sun
touches a flowering bud
I touched your soul
and our love grew like a flowering rose."
To see a woman learn to be fearless again. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[wordman]

lol,it is a sculpture in ice ,thank you for the visit

[Great Aunt Astri]

I still don't like the image, but, as ice, I do see the relevance to your poem.

[wordman]

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Great Aunt Astri]

Ok, lovely words, but what a horrible image!!! ( perhaps it wasn't you that put it there?-- nude woman stuck to some black sticky looking staff?) Wordman, a little warning, I think you may have a virus on your computer. When I opened your page, my computer collapsed!

[jesserose99]

I like this word man. Haven't been on in awhile it nice to see your stuff. Sounds like a beautiful experience. So meaningful when someone can be such a connection, that they break down the walls around you.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit and it`s good to see you back

[jennifer little]

hey great write i enjoyed it . keep up the great work . and keep writing

[wordman]

thank you again

[Kumarmani Mahakul]

Through love and bloom heart started to melt and this gave emotion to feel. Touch given was like sun's touch and flowering bud touched the soul. You have very brilliantly penned this poem. An interesting sharing is done here.

[wordman]

thank you again my friend

[Amanda Trerotola]

Very passionate and filled with love.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit