Moon Beams

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Catching moon beams,

walking on crystal air,

gliding over the ocean,

full of love,without a care.

 

Sliding on a rainbow,

jumping on to a star,

fire racing across the water,

as i drag moon beams on the way.

 

Moon beams glowing,

in her eyes,

as i watch,

my beautiful venus rise.

 

The smile on her face,

lights up the skies,

as she walks on my moon beams,

i get lost in her eyes...

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Makes me want to go on vacation I miss the ocean.

[wordman]

lol,i haven`t seen the ocean in a few years tate,i miss it to..but you have the great lakes close by

[Karen Redburn]

Sigh... the metaphor of an ideal woman? Love your words they paint a lovely picture of the perfect relationship. Beautiful!

[wordman]

thank you karen for the visit

[Paul Bell]

Only a great woman can make you this way.
She sure sounds like a great girl.
Hope she's walking on your moonbeams for a long time.

[wordman]

just a poem paul,but i appreciate your review

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem my friend.
"The smile on her face,
lights up the skies,
as she walks on my moon beams,
i get lost in her eyes."
the above lines. The best days of our life. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thank you for reading john

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Love is a mystical thing in a land of unknown mysteries- when you see fantasy in another’s being than it is true magic come alive..beautiful words🌹

[wordman]

your comment was magic,thank you

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol..only a pleasure🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure always🌹

[wordman]

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Pete]

not a bad way to travel as you whisk us away on this smooth getaway. the lengths we will go to for love.
… When the moon hits your eye like a big pizza pie - that's amore. the eyes are the windows of the soul after all ...

[wordman]

you got to dream big pete,heavens is all thw way to the top my friend,,thank you

[Diane]

This is a very lovely poem. The picture is amazing too.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit diane

[Weeping willow]

Very beautiful words to express love ;-]

[wordman]

thank you w/w appreciate your visit

[sette]

as always romance is in the air good writing wordman.

[wordman]

thank you sette

[sette]

you are welcome

[lessa (kenzie)]

aww what a wonderful write here, This is so lovely

[wordman]

thank you alex,i appreciate your review