Moon Beams

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Catching moon beams,

walking on crystal air,

gliding over the ocean,

full of love,without a care.

 

Sliding on a rainbow,

jumping on to a star,

fire racing across the water,

as i drag moon beams on the way.

 

Moon beams glowing,

in her eyes,

as i watch,

my beautiful venus rise.

 

The smile on her face,

lights up the skies,

as she walks on my moon beams,

i get lost in her eyes...

Reviews

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

...This is such a wonderful and beautiful write. Enjoyed this write.

[wordman]

thank you for dropping by

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

not a problem

[Lea Sheryn]

Lovely. Moonbeams always call romance to mind.

[wordman]

of course,thank you

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome, Wordman.

[goldenscar__]

She's so lucky....... =))

[wordman]

lol,i doubt it,,thank you

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'moon Beams'
wordman,
There is so much thrill in the presence of moonlight.
It reaches down deep, thrills our souls with its light.
We fly with joy and leap so high.
It's love glow gives and gives.
We gain new sight
Bless you,
Mr Ron.
Kathy

[wordman]

you are to kind kathy,bless you

[Kathy Van Kurin]

I was thinking the same about you. Take care of yourself and have a nice evening.

[wordman]

thank you,feel terrible tonight

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As always Ron, so very romantic and expressive.

[wordman]

thank you john

[gram linski]

beautiful poem, dude,I hope you are now married,

[wordman]

thank you,yes all my life

[gram linski]

What, you've been married, all your life, since you were an innocent child, discuss,

[wordman]

no,since about 18,all my adult life

[John the Baptist]

Beautiful word pictures in this one. Liked the way the images subtly moved from the skies to the eyes of the beloved.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Jade]

AWW this is a very beautiful sweet adoring write.
Nicely done, like the song choice as well

[wordman]

thank you,again

[Jade]

not at a problem at all.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very nice short poem! I liked it!

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Angelgurlintheclouds]

Great words to this poem!

[wordman]

glad you liked it,,thanks

[Angelgurlintheclouds]

Your welcome(: