Moon Beams

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Catching moon beams,

walking on crystal air,

gliding over the ocean,

full of love,without a care.

 

Sliding on a rainbow,

jumping on to a star,

fire racing across the water,

as i drag moon beams on the way.

 

Moon beams glowing,

in her eyes,

as i watch,

my beautiful venus rise.

 

The smile on her face,

lights up the skies,

as she walks on my moon beams,

i get lost in her eyes...

Reviews

[Elaine]

A beautiful place to take us these days. I enjoyed this a great deal - thank you for the lovely imagery!

[Fran Marie]

A lovely romantic piece
moon beams and stars bring
out the magic of the night sky
and put the light in ones eyes

nicely penned

[wordman]

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Nix is typing...]

This was such a beautiful poem, Wordman! I loved the imagery in this! It was so romantic!!!!

100/100

Nix ❤️

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Poetic License]

And I still find myself releasing that deep, contented sigh before I even realize it. I literally look around to see who made that silly high school girl sighing sound! You never fail to bring out the romantic even in me. Thank you for the beauty of your living, romantic heart.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,good to see you

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Wordman... I love your presentation...
I felt as tho I were sliding off a Rainbow and onto a Star... a Keeper for me. gently, Pat

[wordman]

lol,and i caught you,,thanks

[Ruth]

Ah, beautiful...love is truly a decadent vision to absorb and explain and you have done so beautifully here :)

[wordman]

thank you ruth

[GardenDelights]

Beautiful...your love reminds me of my fiancé's love, a man whom God sent to me when I left that selection job up to Him. He also writes songs and poems. I hope you really do have a special woman in your life!

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[GardenDelights]

yuppers....

[barleygirl]

I'm not a big fan of romantic poems, maybe that's why I haven't read you in a long while. The thing I like about this poem, however, is that your imagery is lively & fresh . . . "crystal air" . . . "drag moon beams" . . . looking closer, I see you use "moon beams" a few times close together. I know you're not picky about these things, as I am, but I would try to find a little bit different way to say it each time. All in all, a well-rounded romantic message! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[wordman]

thank you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Pryde Foltz]

Ohh, so nice, Ron:) You were meant to write songs. Fabulous:)

[wordman]

thanks pryde,i wish i could