Bitter Sweet Memories

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bitter sweet memories,

lay gentle on her mind,

another place,

another time.

 

The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.

 

she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,

she feels like a woman left behind.

 

Once her heart,

a beautiful rose,

now her heart tattered and torn,

as it starts to close.

 

Her mind wanders,

her soul at bay,

maybe love will bloom again,

i hope and pray.

 

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.

 

But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...

© 2017 wordman

Reviews

[Patricia]

Very beautiful and touching and "she" may just melt if you keep writing like this.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Sahara Mist]

This poem resurrects my faith in love. Thank you for such a lovely write.

[wordman]

thank you for reading my humble work

[Crimson]

I love this poem, it's very well crafted and written- you have a very good use of emotion your writing, well done!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[EcstaticEuphoria]

So electrifying! My heart did skip a beat! Love your writing as always

[wordman]

thank you for reading,glad you liked it

[Avia]

It's a very nice poem. Beautiful picture too :)

[wordman]

thank you,glad you liked it

[Avia]

You're welcome

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed a romantic overture Ron as the protagonist is prepared to wait for the love of his life and to rescue her from her retreat. Love the tenor of it a lot but unsure about the repetition and rhyming scheme.

[wordman]

me neither john,lol,,thank you

[Giulia King]

Romantic, sweet write. Loved everything about it, especially the 4th stanza

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Zoya]

Aw, thats so sweet. The last para is worth fantasizing about. Beautifully penned!

[wordman]

thank you zoe

[Zoya]

No problem

[Sami Khalil]

Very romantic and mesmerizing. One of your best. Always an honor to visit you.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Any time.

[Diane]

Sometimes I can listen to a song for the first time and it will bring out all emotions. This poem did the same.
I like the way you are letting "her, us, and everyone) know that even the broken heal with time, even the heart.
Everything about this poem was perfect in every way. Nice work!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit diane