Bitter Sweet Memories

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bitter sweet memories,

lay gentle on her mind,

another place,

another time.

 

The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.

 

she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,

she feels like a woman left behind.

 

Once her heart,

a beautiful rose,

now her heart tattered and torn,

as it starts to close.

 

Her mind wanders,

her soul at bay,

maybe love will bloom again,

i hope and pray.

 

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.

 

But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...

© 2017 wordman

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon..."

[Sami Khalil]

"The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.



she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,"

[wordman]

don`t we all,thank you my friend

[Sami Khalil]

:)...............

[jennifer little]

great poem keep up the good work . keep writing love the romantic poems .

[wordman]

thank`s,i guess this is my calling

[jennifer little]

probally ur real good at writing romantic poems

[wordman]

thank`s,i appreciate it

[Karen Redburn]

Love this one. A true description of a heart that has lost its love. But, I do like that there is a hopeful note and possibility still exists. Great poem!

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[FJ Davis]

Some might call you a "hopeless romantic."
But, as someone once said, you seem more to be a hopeful romantic.
Impressive work, Wordman.

[wordman]

lol, i am confused in my own mind..thank you for the visit

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful
Enjoyed
I loved this

[wordman]

thank you,thought you left town

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Nah just been busy work health issues family you know

[wordman]

get well soon

[just is]

I can kinda relate to this write a tad, Very nicely written from the heart.

[wordman]

i think many can relate,thank you for reading

[Falcon1]

Great words and balance of a loving heart and that of a nature write too Every day you get better as you practice your craft.

[wordman]

lol,maybe i will get it right

[thuthana]

ooooooh i absolutely love your tone and cadence here! very reminiscent of the romantic poets of the 18th-19th cents w/ a modern-minimalist expression. bravo!

[wordman]

maybe reincarnation is real,thank you for the visit