Bitter Sweet Memories

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bitter sweet memories,

lay gentle on her mind,

another place,

another time.

 

The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.

 

she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,

she feels like a woman left behind.

 

Once her heart,

a beautiful rose,

now her heart tattered and torn,

as it starts to close.

 

Her mind wanders,

her soul at bay,

maybe love will bloom again,

i hope and pray.

 

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.

 

But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...

© 2017 wordman

Reviews

[Flowers of Eternity]

I love it! You have a very touching tribute to that person.

P. S. Thanks for reviewing my work as well!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[MalihaTypes]

Wow! I was moved by this!! It is such a compassionate poem, I felt every word of it. Inspiraional..

[wordman]

thank you very much

[lightsong]

You write with pure emotions, with serenity, crystal and clear, You compose some beautifully amazing expressions, You can reach to all our hearts. gently like a breeze.

wonderfully selfless compassionate poem, one day she will realize that her true love is You, the one who was watching over her, was feeling her, in each step... who will melt her cocoon, and bloom her heart again.

[wordman]

i put all my emotions and feelings in all my poetry,
poetry is your feelings,you spill out your heart and soul in your writes,they remain a piece of your soul,,thank you for the lovely review

[Falcon1]

A beautiful tale of romance gone bad but there he stood looking for his chance to rise up and fill her heart with love all over again as soon as she can recover and start anew she sure will be looking for you a friend indeed.

[wordman]

thank you falcon

[Onlyme]

Bittersweet of a broken-hearted lady. Such sentiments that ache and yearn inside still.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Onlyme]

thank you for sharing.

[jennifer little]

good job keep up the great work . loved it

[jennifer little]

ooops guess ive already read this poem and read it again but anyways great job i read it twice lol

[wordman]

thank you jennifer

[Richard McLin]

Simply beautiful. You have a fantastic grasp on the narrative of this poem, and it hits the reader right in the heart. Your wording is pitch perfect, and the flow is super smooth. The only flaw with this piece is that I didn't write it lol. It's a great piece, and it makes me excited to read more of your work. Great job.
-Richard

[wordman]

please do,lol,you give great reviews

[Richard McLin]

I only give great reviews to great pieces of writing.

[wordman]

i appreciate the kind words my friend

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Time and a place for everything better to have patience and see the true full blooming than watch it fade- wonderful words like always- wishing your dreams come true🌹

[wordman]

you are sweet,thank you for reading

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Always a pleasure just don’t get much time now for reviews with new job but I also appreciate your reviews thankyou🌹

[wordman]

we will cross paths when we can,

[sette]

how sweet my friend that you will be there when she blooms it means you will be waiting for that time and that is so romantic

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[sette]

no problem

[Tannu Prajapati]

lovely, very beautiful. i loved the last stanza.:))

[wordman]

thank you for reading and leaving your review

[Tannu Prajapati]

My pleasure. :))