With Out You

These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...

Reviews

[MAC]

Amen! simple, direct and nothing more needed in this write. excellent

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,appreciate it ~

[Ardra]

Such heartfelt words....beautifully done :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Mirror]

"...i will always`s be your man ..." yeah, go Word!!! :)

I keep reading this poem over and over. Love it

[wordman]

i`m glad it has touched you !

[Michelle]

very nice, well done!!!! love the second last paragraph

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Najam Us Saher]

Very passionate and heart warming words. There is honesty in your words. I really liked this.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Gorgeous romance and rhythm to a wonderful song. You are serenading good. I love it.

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, Wordman.

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful longing, a heart compelled to love deep, and to love forever.

[wordman]

thank you very much

[An owl on the moon]

Always a joy.

[Paul Bell]

That's the ultimate compliment to a woman.
But only one woman.
Well put.

[wordman]

tank you paul

[Rogerh]

A really touching poem. Sounded like it came from a romantic heart.

[wordman]

thank you !