With Out You

These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...

Reviews

[A. Kim Spradling]

WOW! I can only imagine this kind of depth of love from someone. I know what it is like to give. I do not know what it is like to receive. What a wonderful heart you have.

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Sami Khalil]

"your the only one for me.



You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind."

[wordman]

thank you my friend

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful sax, really bringing meaning and romance to the poems set up - really meaninful🌹🌹

[wordman]

the music always amplifies the words,life is music and words,,thank you for reading

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure - if life was only music how much easier it would be-🌹

[wordman]

then we would just change the channel because we couldn`t make up our mind wht we wanted to listen to

[Zoya]

Aw, what a sweet confession. Beautifully penned!

[wordman]

thank you zoe

[Zoya]

Most welcome

[raj24]

THAT'S LIKE A SONG, I ENJOYED SINGING IT AND ITS A WONDERFUL WORK

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit

[jennifer little]

beautiful piece of work .
great flow with the words . i enjoyed reading this shows the passion of a lost lover . i can kind of relate to this poem . keep up the great work .

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[jennifer little]

ur welcome

[wordman]

good to see you back

[jennifer little]

i have been through a lot these bast 3 years so its been hard for me but slowly getting back

[wordman]

well writing will be a good start

[ROXANE DORSEY]

You said all too well what true love represents and thanks for sharing

[wordman]

thanks,,good to see you

[Karmee]

This is a very sweet write, very beautiful.

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A sweet and touching tribute to a special someone. I enjoyed the read. It's refreshing to find that love is still alive and well in this modern age of social media romance. Good write.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit