With Out You

These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

To be blessed by undying enduring love is a gift. One we should all recognize and wish for! Your Lady is truly blessed to have your love and your poetry!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,don`t share my poetry a lot

[lightsong]

Your poems are like sweet songs of love, full of affections and passions, sometimes gentle, sometimes strong, they flow so nicely with a musical tune, thank You for sharing this, and may Love ever shine over You*

[wordman]

thank you,you are kind

[lightsong]

You are welcome my friend.

[Falcon1]

You Romantic Devil you capturing a heart of Gold.

[wordman]

thank you falcon

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely sentiment expressed in these tender and romantic lines.

Chris

[wordman]

thank you chris

[Onlyme]

This is so romantic and passionate and beautiful expressed like a love song. Made my heart swell and feel the spirit of everything you said with such loveliness and emotions.

[wordman]

thank you for reading my humble work

[Onlyme]

Ron you really are a sweetheart and a lovely man. With a wonderful heart and soul. And humble work is an understatement. You are very talented and gifted. But modest. As I would expect from a decent man like YOU. God bless you sir. As I do for being my friend. Dee

[wordman]

the pleasure is mine dawn,and i`m blushing

[Onlyme]

Don't blush Ron. As it's all true. And truth speaks. Louder than words. Hugs. Dawn.

[SZHZIA]

A well written love poem filled with emotion. Thanks for sharing..

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[SZHZIA]

You are welcome... :-)

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This is a very emotional piece i enjoyed reading thanks for sharing

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[sette]

a touching poem my friend there is a flow of emotions between joy and sadness.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[sette]

no problem my friend

[Ivory]

Such a beautiful and yet sad piece...

[wordman]

thank you for reading and leaving your comment

[θεά]

A dedicated ode to love and the endless pining of the bleeding heart for her. Well expressed wordman.

[wordman]

i think i was born to write the blues,,thank you

[θεά ]

Quizas, quizas, quizas. You are welcome.