Memories

Memories

A Poem by wordman



In the misty waters

of my mind,

i reminisce of the hallowed,

memories that i left behind.

 

Once as vivid

as night and day

now only misty memories

slowly fading away

 

Fading away

like a gentle breeze

on a summers day

but it seems everything fades away

 

Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew...

© 2017 wordman


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This is one of your best Wordman. I enjoyed the rhymes and the rhythm of this one very much.

Bravo!

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

appreciate your visit..
Very well written. Memories can seem so nostalgic and beautiful, and you captured that here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
A beautiful poem. Feel of ancient times and ancient words. You made the reader feel and understand the emotions. The poem left the reader with the feeling of sadness. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thaks john,turned out to be a sad write
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Nice lines ...
Memories can't be erasable...well done poet

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
shruthi

7 Years Ago

You are most Welcome
Strong and real... well said Wordman.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

good to see you chris,,thanks
Feelings grow old n cold but never forgotten. Thanks again for your wonderful poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for reading my junk
ROXANE DORSEY

7 Years Ago

no its not junk to this poetess. thanks
This poem is amazing. Honestly, my favorite kind of poetry. Sometimes, the moments you want to last forever, fade into memories. And the moments you wish you didn't remember, become your entire life.


Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you,glad you liked it
Although not my usual cup of tea, I liked this love poem of yours a lot, so full of pathos & pain. I imagine it must have hurt just writing it? Glad I found it wordman.........All Good Things, Neville

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

glad you found it to ! ,thank you
Neville

7 Years Ago

my pleasure entirely
"Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew..."

How sad to let go at times.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic words dancing with a harrowing tone, I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
 wordman

7 Years Ago

make a song out of it

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