Memories

In the misty waters

of my mind,

i reminisce of the hallowed,

memories that i left behind.

 

Once as vivid

as night and day

now only misty memories

slowly fading away

 

Fading away

like a gentle breeze

on a summers day

but it seems everything fades away

 

Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew...

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Very nicely conveyed lines. Full of sentiment Ron. Like your choice of music too. Have a good weekend.

Chris

[wordman]

thank you chris,you to..stopped by your page thursday

[aubreydiamond]

Beautiful read - beautiful words! 🌸

[wordman]

thank you aubrey

[Jade]

This is such a wonderful, lovely write. I like this a lot

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[LazerRays]

This is a beautifully written poem you have here. The flow is just perfect and honestly, I dont even mind the lowercase 'i's (although that might be a good change) the description really brings you to a journey in the back of your mind. A nostalgic, sad and kinda bitter memory we watch unfold in the crevests of your brain. Well done!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[The dark Hydra]

Mommy you love me right? Love me harder then daddy will.

[LazerRays]

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[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I dont remember the details of each day...just the intensity of them. I dont remember what brought about the end..just the sorrow of it. I dont remember who fell in love first ....I just remember that it brings and smile to my heart. Love these words and feelings!

[wordman]

sweet words,thank you

[Sneh]

However we try, can never recreate the moment which becomes a memory and after little longer fades away. Lovely short and sweet composition.
Sneh

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,sometimes they last forever

[Onlyme]

So heart-touching and so very sincere.

[wordman]

thank you dee

[UncleFossil]

Having produced an epic poem known as Seasons of Black September then Shadow of Dys within my first collection -- I will give you some insight about the WritersCafe era before the poetry became more dominate here. During the era I first introduced the namesake roster -- two of them came from here as Tabloid Purposes IV a few also emerged here too. A lot of the writers have cult followings and seen a blind eye from the industry factions. If you never tried writing a short story, don't knock it. The piece you reviewed from the pastor was no poem but a narrative journal. Study anthology publications because that's been the print platform for short stories for years. I never published short poems in publications but seen an epic poem in the pages of a literary journal where two of them are in circulation. The reason one is a historic document; the publisher is an illustrator and an author himself. I gripe because way too many poets and not enough journalists.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,i can write short stories.
just more interested in poetry i guess

[UncleFossil]

As you got to see Boycotting Truth -- I have a Gothic Horror story that's ranged in the top ten on Wattpad.com. The new members can't hot link sources in their articles though the commentary write the html to link and hover commentary.

[wordman]

you should re post some here

[UncleFossil]

I am working as an advisory role for others who want to do controversial subject matter -- I invite my research to be played with as I have something on Academia.edu. I am doing temples for those who want to engage or challenge my publications if they find opposition in the profanity.

[Ola]

I like how you described the memories as "fading away like a gentle breeze" because while it's sad it doesn't seem hopeless just something that happens to us and we accept it. So overall love the poem

[wordman]

thank you for the visit