my Cherie amour

my girl,

she is the girl of my dreams,

she is a dream come true

she is beautiful,

and she is smart,

built like a brick house

sometimes we talk for hours,

about nothing,and about everything,

we sit on the swing and just talk

i am so in love,

when she kisses me,

it sends shivers down my spine

her skin so soft,her breasts full,

her sweet lips kissing mine

i`m so proud that she is mine

and when we make love

i`m in heaven,she makes me,

feel like a man

i am so proud of her,

she is everything a man,

could ever want or need

and her love is mine...

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

Be still my beating heart! I love these lines....(sometimes we talk for hours, about nothing,and about everything,) I remember those days when love was brand new and just sitting and talking together was a most romantic and rewarding thing. You recaptured those feelings in this lovely write. ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,sent you a couple via message

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

Awww, this is such a lovely, beautiful write.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Karmee]

Such a very lovely, romantic write. Very well written.

[wordman]

thank you kit

[Lea Sheryn]

Your love shines through so besutifully.

[wordman]

thank you lea

[Lea Sheryn]

You're very welcome.

[angel]

Wonderful to hear a happy love story with a good ending.
I am very happy for you, and you wrote about it well.

[wordman]

lol,everybody likes the good endings..thank you

[Falcon1]

Very precious very lovely words reminding me of a love I once known but now are gone but better to have loved then to be alone forever.

[wordman]

never miss the dance,,thanks

[Cherrie Palmer]

The ode to love, na the ode to a lover. Nothing better.
I have a small suggestion.:)
Alter the ending to say; ...and I am hers. ...

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Chris Shaw]

Beautifully romantic poetry. I enjoyed reading.

Chris

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Laurierose]

The theme of your poetry is always very appreciative of women. I love the wonderful rendition of the Stevie Wonder song. The original song itself is dangerously sweet. Such precious declarations of love to the person we love should be this unapologetic. Beautiful interpretation. Great read.

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Donna]

This is beautiful! I would love for someone to write me a poem like that someday! Its the little things that mean so much. Great job!

[wordman]

thank you donna,and they will