Silence

 

Silence

rolling through my brain,

as fast,

as a fast moving train.

 

Through,

the portals,

of my mind ,taking me back,

back in time.

 

Where

memories run deep,

deep into my soul,

a place,only i can go.

 

like

a waterfall,

falling from my mind,

taking me back, back in time...

 

Reviews

[apennylate]

This made me fall hard against the empty air of silence... Took me back again, and made my hairs stand on end from the simplicity contained therein...Utterly brilliant, and drips with soul... Magically penned...

[wordman]

thank you very much !

[apennylate]

You are most welcome

[AYVID N]

I love this lyrical piece, dear Wordman.

like
a waterfall,
falling from my mind,
taking me back, back in time...

Such beautiful placing of words...

[wordman]

god writes all my poems,thank you

[AYVID N]

Its great to meet a believer. You are welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful flow of words and thoughts. You took the reader with you with the fine use of description to places and thoughts. I liked the ending a lot. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

good to see you john,thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to have found you and you are welcome my friend.

[Natehy]

Sometimes the silence guides our minds, to reconcile with inner emotions, to go back and reminisce and to look toward the future. The silence can also lead to deeper connections within ourselves. A beautiful write!

[wordman]

thank you very much

[E G TEN]

Only in total silence that we can get a grip of the beautiful madness from within us. A delightful piece of self searching you have here Mr. Ron, very cool, EG.

[wordman]

thank you very much !

[FreedomFighter]

silence is very powerful and your poem reflects its entirety

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[Ruth]

Sometimes that silence leads us to fond memories, a gentle meander through them at times is a blessing and peaceful thing :)

[wordman]

thank you poppy !

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Gorgeous and fitting for an inspiration. You do it right...:::)()))))

[wordman]

thank you sami !

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, Ron....:::)))

[Miss Sharon]

Beautiful and peaceful Ron. I love the format as well and the rhyming is soft and subtle. Very nicely done...as per your forte! ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you sharon,always appreciate your visits

[Miss Sharon]

Always a pleasure my dear friend! ~Sharon

[SZHZIA]

Some time silences are so painful and give sorrow. when we talk, every thing becomes clear. But silences also give a great change to think better. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece. Nice job.

Best
Szhzia

[wordman]

we need some silence at times,gives us time to reflect,,thank you

[SZHZIA]

it is my pleasure, wordman and you are welcome. I have reviewed your works after a long time.