Silence

Silence

A Poem by wordman
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Silence
rolling through my brain,
as fast,
as a fast moving train.
 
Through,
the portals,
of my mind ,taking me back,
back in time.
 
Where
memories run deep,
deep into my soul,
a place,only i can go.
 
like
a waterfall,
falling from my mind,
taking me back, back in time...

 

© 2017 wordman


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That beautiful gift u have just keeps on giving Hun!! Beautiful work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

just words,thank you again
Creative...Very true and thoughtful poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
This is captivating Wordman ... I look to see more from you soon ...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Farmgirl

7 Years Ago

I noticed ... But, I believe a piece is coming soon ...
 wordman

7 Years Ago

i think something is transforming in me
Farmgirl

7 Years Ago

I know it is ... You just have to Let it go & release it no matter how difficult the words are to ty.. read more
that waterfall never stops running...

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

you don`t need to remind me my friend,,thank`s
Aloha wordman, a beautiful dreamy piece. There's a real contentment in your words. Lovely read. Izzy

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for the visit izzy !
Reading this poem made me nostalgic.. simple yet it impacts my emotion.. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
Memories can be double edged sword, regardless they have power that you have captured here.

Are you interested in constructive thoughts as well?

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Very spiritual and peaceful and
I feel the strong emotions in this beautiful
Piece but I'm weeping and crying with
anything sad or beautiful or emotional
because of what I'm dealing with so I'm very emotional. Thank you for sharing my friend. God bless.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

may the sun shine on you bringing eternal peace and love
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

7 Years Ago

Thank you my friend :)
 wordman

7 Years Ago

my pleasure
Four layers of silence, each opening a corner into your spiritual needs perhaps - certainly your day to day life. Silence - if there is such a thing, somehow highlights the senses. You've expressed that in each stanza so fluently.. no shouting, almost whispering.

'like a waterfall, ~ falling from my mind, ~ taking me back, back in time...' Beautiful, a new beginning?

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you emma joy,i appreciate your reviews
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

I owe you quite a few at the moment and - will call as soon as I can, promise.
The sound of silence echos in this piece. Excellent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you sarah,appreciate your visit

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