Touch my heart

 

Touch my heart

leave your print

not a lot

just a hint

Leave me breathless

crying for more

as you gently

close my door

touch my heart

leave your print

not a lot

but just a hint

take my hand

hold it tight

as i dream

of you tonight...

Reviews

[mercy party]

simply soulful. smooth....

[wordman]

thank you !

[Robert Haigh]

A hint can say a lot! Nicely penned!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit robert

[MCS]

Sweet and touching read ... enjoyed

[wordman]

thank you very much !

[MCS]

You're so welcomed

[Gerry Legister]

These are such gentle and loving lines, they leave my heart mesmerize with the hint of dreams

[wordman]

a hint of dreams sounds like a great poem,thank you again

[pinkunicorn]

So lovely and just the right amount of sugar. I love it!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

Nice rhythm. A sweet, elegant piece. Well done.

Sheer Terror

[wordman]

thank you for reading !

[mou]

it reads like a song! a very gentle and beautiful write :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit my friend !

[mou]

you're most welcome :)

[Miss Sharon]

Oh whoa...be still my beating heart! Your poetry always touches my mind, soul and spirit. That's a sign of a gifted writer my friend...MORE writing please!! ~Sharon

[wordman]

lol,you make me blush !

[Miss Sharon]

(lol,you make me blush!) That's ok Ron...it looks good on you! ~Sharon

[Chris A Jones]

Beautifully worded and eloquently written. I wish I was this skilled with words.

[wordman]

thank you ! i`m sure you`re better

[Chris A Jones]

When it comes to poems, don't even think I could come close. Thanks for the vote of confidence though.