Touch my heart

 

Touch my heart

leave your print

not a lot

just a hint

Leave me breathless

crying for more

as you gently

close my door

touch my heart

leave your print

not a lot

but just a hint

take my hand

hold it tight

as i dream

of you tonight...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

One of the great songs and amazing poetry my friend. When two people find safety and are content. A perfect place to know. Thank you wordman for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thank you for reading it john

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Paul]

A short but deeply written poem. Beautiful words of love and passion here. Nicely done!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit paul

[Ladylove]

Love it so deep great writing keep up the good work

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Ladylove]

Your welcome no problem

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Keep writing very beautiful

[EcstaticEuphoria]

I love this, so simple but poignant and deep. Great wiring, keep it up!

[wordman]

thank you !

[Surya]

Haha, it's lovely...repetition worked here...Take my hand hold it tight, as i dream of u tonight...i liked these lines..

[wordman]

you are sweet,thank you !

[Surya]

Haha, it's my pleasure..

[CAPOLAVORO]

Very nice. Such sweet words coming from a sweet person. :) Keep writing.

[wordman]

you are sweet,thank you !

[CAPOLAVORO]

You are more sweet haha. You are welcome.

[wordman]

does this mean were going to the prom together?

[CAPOLAVORO]

Haha you got to do more than that.

[wordman]

o k,i will work on it then

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lyrical song of love Ron said with passion in heaps.

[wordman]

mr john,lol the song makes the poem..thanks

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

Love the simplicity of your words yet they have such a profound and deeper meaning well done

[wordman]

i guess i have never heard a love song with ten dollar words,love is simple,the expression of love should be effortless and simple,,thank you

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

Very much agree should be effortless and simple

[wordman]

and hell i don`t know any ten dollar words anyway !

[AYVID N]

Love so effortlessly and elegantly conveyed. Perfect rhyming. This little love poem is indeed very special!

[wordman]

i appreciate your comment,thank you !

[AYVID N]

You are welcome!

[Tony Jordan]

A truly beautiful bijout love write Ron. Heres to the official starter poem of WC Valentine's season

[wordman]

thank you ! and so let it be ..