Touch my heart

 

Touch my heart

leave your print

not a lot

just a hint

Leave me breathless

crying for more

as you gently

close my door

touch my heart

leave your print

not a lot

but just a hint

take my hand

hold it tight

as i dream

of you tonight...

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So beautiful heartfelt
kind gentle and romantic.

Nice ink!

[wordman]

thank you benita

[Onlyme]

This is so sentimental and soft-hearted. Made me say aww out loud.

[wordman]

thank you dee ,when i wrote it i almost didn`t post it

[Onlyme]

Well I for one, am so glad you did wordman. It really shines and shows your heart.

[wordman]

yeap,a big teddy bear i guess

[Onlyme]

I love teddy bear..

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

i love this
your poems show you are a true romantic old fashioned gentleman

[wordman]

thank you julie

[sette]

one creatively and expressively written piece my friend keep it up

[wordman]

thank you for the visit sette

[Rye]

This is so lovely and enjoyable. I like the flow and rhyme scheme, reminds me of a song called 'You look wonderful tonight" By Eric Clapton.

[wordman]

i know the song,thank you for reading

[Bonnie Paige]

So pretty Wordman. I hope someone out there who is somebody notices your poems. This one it's just so sweet.

[wordman]

well,you noticed it..thank you for the visit

[Bonnie Paige]

Very Good!

[wordman]

well,i am the wordman
merry christmas

[Bonnie Paige]

You to🌋🎄

[Zoya]

You're a master of romantic poetry! Lovely and tender as always.

[wordman]

thank you for the sweet review zoe

[Zoya]

Most welcome

[Poetic License]

You have officially reduced me to a pile of goo. This is so sweet, so gentle. You truly need to bottle your romantic spirit. You would make a killing selling it. Simply wonderful.

[wordman]

you are sweet,thank you

[Diane]

Aw I like this one. Very sweet.

[wordman]

Thank you for the visit

[Melobldnfr]

This is gentle . I like it.

[wordman]

thank you for reading