Lay me down,by your side

I want to,

lay down by your side;

feel the warmth,

from your heart.

Feel your love,feel your pain,

as it flows,

from your soul,

in to mine.

I 

want to,

lay down,

by your side.

Hold you close,

your body next to mine,

feel your love,

till i die...

Reviews

[Bo Lanier]

wow! what a love song. loved it!

[wordman]

thank you ! ,appreciate the review

[tanmay7551]

Lovely! Went through the poetry along with the music and experience was mesmerizing... Soulful!

[wordman]

thank you,the music fits the poem`s mood
it makes it a lot better

[YanZeros]

very sweet simple words of loving intentions! Lovin' this poetry wordman :)

[wordman]

thank you yan.i appreciate you !

[YanZeros]

you're welcome! :)

[Ted Kniffen]

There is a great deal of emotion in these few simple words, written by someone who cares for the other and wants to help ease their pain. Well done, wordman. Good write

[wordman]

thank you ted,appreciate the review

[Another Relic]

This is captivating to read. Love is of all the emotions one of the most positive and life-changing.

[wordman]

love moves the world,thank you !

[Samuel Dickens]

A great and fitting ode to Willy and the passion a man may have for a woman. Well done, my friend.

[wordman]

thanks for the visit sam..

[Michael X]

A soft and delicate, emotionally charged poem that speaks volumes within a few powerful words!

[wordman]

thank you michael ,i appreciate your visit !

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Love is the sponge that absorbs everything...
makes life worth living, and dying for :)
This is very intimate and sweet

[wordman]

it just comes natural,thank you for reading !

[Unknown Poet]

Very nice n beautifully written .... 😊

[wordman]

thank you uday !

[Unknown Poet]

My pleasure bro... 😊

[Laura Lynn]

lovely, the ribbons, so country

[wordman]

thank you laura lynn.. i had come lay by my side by sam smith but changed it