Lay me down,by your side

I want to,

lay down by your side;

feel the warmth,

from your heart.

Feel your love,feel your pain,

as it flows,

from your soul,

in to mine.

I 

want to,

lay down,

by your side.

Hold you close,

your body next to mine,

feel your love,

till i die...

Reviews

[Ruth]

This speaks of not only the good but holding the pain also, a special bonding that is true love, beautiful...

[wordman]

you have to take both for it to work,thank you !

[Miss Sharon]

Beautiful and romantic...as per your forte my friend! Have a beautiful Christmas Ron. ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you sharon,merry christmas to you !

[T.S. Sky]

Brilliant and nicely written.

[wordman]

you are sweet,thank you !

[T.S. Sky]

You're welcome. 😊

[Chris A Jones]

It is a very moving poem. Nicely done!

[wordman]

thank you mr jones,appreciate the review

[Pete]

can't get much deeper than this. this puts the 'R' in romantic. a touching piece for certain. last 2 lines seal it.

[wordman]

thank you pete !

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

The simplest lines arranged perfectly. Mr. Word Man. This piece warmed my heart a little. Thank you.

Sheer Terror

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Lovely and full of emotions. Great work friend :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend :)

[Sami Khalil]

A song of love from the heart and soul of a great romantic...:).................

[wordman]

you are kind my friend,thank you !

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)...................