Windows Of Your Soul

I can look,

into your soul;

as i read,

the stories you hold.

 

Hold deep,

in your heart;

as you write,

your soul plays a part.

 

It reads,

like a movie script;

from long ago,

i love ,reading your soul.

 

You touch me,

in every word,

i feel the emotion,

coming from your heart

as your soul,plays it`s part...

Reviews

[Farmgirl]

I love this !!!

Its how I feel when I read the writings of others ...
We all have a story to tell and share with the world to those who are willing to take the time to listen or read of them..

I love this Wordman thank you for sending me this :')

[Farmgirl]

I still will never grow tired of reading it ..

[wordman]

this was the last poem i wrote for writers cafe
thank you for reading

[Farmgirl]

=) well its beautiful...

Just let the words flow wordman Believe in yourself more.. You are way more capable than I think you give yourself credit for ... You can write about anything ... Be inspired and get that pen out again :)

[willbradley]

I liked the simplicity. It wasn't verbose. It wasn't trying to reinvent anything. That was refreshing.

There are a few issues with grammar, but I'm not really one to talk. The bit about the movie script felt a little juvenile, out of place and forced against the honesty of the rest of the piece. Though, I appreciate a modern, more pointed reference that brings us to a contemporary context. Anne's Rants said it nicely, the meeting of two souls is appropriate here. I like the personal quality, like you're sharing something private. Nice!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[willbradley]

Of course!

[♛ Monet Madden &#..]

Very touching and deep!

Good work :-)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[olla]

this is really touching.. and reflective.. I have spent a long time here just reading.. most of what I have here is what I brought with me from another site that is now defunct.. sometimes it is the comments that people make to others that has the most impact.. comes through the heart.. a gift from the soul..

[wordman]

thank you for the visit and welcome to w/c

[olla]

thank you.. I have actually been here for awhile.. I have just done a lot more reading than reviewing.. but times change and I have decided to become more active.. I look forward to see more of your work..

[wordman]

and i yours ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Anne’sRants]

I love this gentle meeting of spirits.

[wordman]

thank you for reading anne

[R.E. Ray]

We're each a biography, a series of stories, some withheld, some shared. When you can read the stories held back because you read what's not said, you have the essence of the person. You've captured that well here, sir.

[wordman]

i thank you for the visit

[wordman]

i dedicate this poem to all the writers here on w/c

[Onlyme]

Poetry from "the soul" expressed and felt from "soul to mine". Profound and eloquently shared.

[wordman]

thank you very much

[LazerRays]

This is very deep and thoughtful, I enjoyed this. Good job!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Sami Khalil]

"Hold deep,

in your heart;

as you write,

your soul plays a part.



It reads,

like a movie script;"

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

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