You Touch Me

I touched you,

last night .

your skin so soft,

as i caressed your soul.

Your lips

wet,and sweet,

when we`re together,

i feel complete.

You touch me,

i explode inside,

my feelings for you,

i could never hide.

I touched you,

last night.

and you,

you touched me...

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very Romantic and a lovely piece.

[wordman]

thank you very much !

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome :)

[T.S. Sky]

Very romantic poem. Well done!

[wordman]

thank you ! for the visit

[T.S. Sky]

You're welcome. :)

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

A classically beautiful love poem, tenderly penned with strong emotion. The closing lines are wonderful and end on a high note. Thank you for sharing!

[wordman]

thank you jack for the visit !

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)]

You're welcome!

[andrew mitchell]

A touching piece, I like the devotion you shared.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit andrew !

[Goldann]

Passionately inspired. Melodic resonance.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[FJ Davis]

Certainly, being in love requires both parties be somewhat "touched."
Still, a pretty piece worth the read.

[wordman]

thank you danny

[FJ Davis]

Who's danny?
You're welcome.

[Sheila Kline]

Your words accompanied by the lovely music express such tenderness, coupled with passion. Each lover complimented the other!
Very nice thoughts.........

[wordman]

thank you sheila

[Kathy Van Kurin]

wordman,We all long to share our lives with others. "Your touch me" spoke to the awareness of this reality in a simple direct way. I found this message to be lovely in it's own way and just ripple of the surface of hope for future days spent in love's arms. blessings Kathy

[wordman]

thank you kathy !

[KWP]

oh la la ... I know that kind of touch ... it reaches beneath the surface ... beneath self in fact ... takes you to the place we only get tiny glimpses of :) ... nice one you XX

[wordman]

thank you,and may you have many more