Sweet Dreams

I go to bed,

with you, on my mind.

and i dream ,dream of,

what could have been mine.

sweet,sweet dreams,

i have of you!

but sweet dreams

is all i have of you.

sweet,sweet love

brought to my heart

from above

then put,to a poets pen

to fill my heart

with love,yet once again...

Reviews

[Melobldnfr]

I find this beautiful. An old school, Victorian style write in the sense of flow and meter. Timeless. You underestimate yourself, Ron. Well done.

[wordman]

just an observer of life ,that tries to put it to pen .thank you for taking the time to read

[Melobldnfr]

Of course, Ron. Thank you for sharing.

[mou]

it is the sweetest write itself.simple and beautiful..like it :)

[wordman]

like me ,lol thank you mou

[RomaJ]

missing the one you love, holding them in your thoughts, and dreaming of them is sometimes, all we can hold on to. It's makes it bittersweet to waken, and their not there by your side. A lovely poem, Ron.

[wordman]

thank you roma for reading

[Willard Wells]

Sounds a bit of missed or lost love, writing in the shadows of your dreams. Well done.

[wordman]

mr wells i appreciate your visit ! good to see you.

[Willard Wells]

My mind has had me on other journeys which have distracted me. I am at this moment sitting in a small hotel room in southeast Asia, spending my days viewing the island girls I have written about. Naval, Biliran Province, Philippines. Peace be with you my friend.

[wordman]

well ,take care of yourself

[Celie Rose]

Your poem is beautiful. The soft music compliments the moment and gives real meaning to your words. Takes my mind back to a magical time, once upon a time.

[wordman]

thank you for stooping by

[KWP]

so simple and yet deeply endearing, I have to wonder why these two are not together ... many stories can unravel within these lines. Lovely X

[wordman]

i don`t know why you left me darling !

[MOON]

Lovely write full of love and longing.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit moon !

[James]

A lot of sadness poured out here. I can picture someone sitting alone in a chair staring into blankness, just waiting for their love to come back, but they never do.

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit james ! thank`s

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful poem! Love the simplicity of such entrenching meaning. The flow and imagery made the poem enjoyable to read as well.

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very welcome!

[Raylene]

Hello wordsman you know me by my old pen name I created a new one as for your write lovely work as always my dear you emotions of your love and writers do seek happiness in their art

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,i love a mystery

[Raylene]

Anytime dear