The music is so beautiful!!!! Sounds so familiar.. the writing goes great with it!! Ron, this is a great poem with a great feel!! So dreamy & relaxing.. Thanks for the inspiration!
I like this !
And you very much can write .
This is a nice poem I enjoy reading about the longing of having her love back with him even if just for a brief moment within the unconsciousness
I love it so much particularly such beautiful dream that you have in your mind for someone. We all have such dream being human and in really we should have dream. well written, wordman with nice choice of words in clear and simple language. Thanks for sharing.
Best
Szhzia
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you for the visit ! nice to see you
8 Years Ago
My pleasure. You are welcome, Wordman. :-) keep writing
just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living,
i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares
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