You and Me

When i woke

this morning ,

you were on my mind .

I just can`t ,

seem to get over you .

seems your always on my mind .

When it comes to you ,

my heart is blind .

i could never see any one else

in my life .

What kind of life

would it be ?

if there were ,

 no you and me ...

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Deep is the Love felt in this poetic thoughts about that
Special someone. Very cool Ron, Thanks EG

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[Ellen Kolman]

I love this...touched my heart...bravo

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Ellen Kolman]

pleasure is mine

[David Scott]

When you cannot imagine a life without the other person there is a bliss and a fear... I often wonder at the codependency of what we call love. My rational mind can consider many explanations and criteria for the "ideal". Yet the heart is a different animal altogether. Sometimes the dysfunction is where we find the art of loving...
I enjoyed the read Wordman.

[wordman]

yeah ! the heat has a mind of it`s own,thank you

[Cherry]

you write in romantic tones that are really nice.

[wordman]

i am a hopeless romantic,thank you for the visit!

[Workvio]

A very beautiful and romantic poem ... Perfect for getting one's woman in a really good mood ... I shall give it a try ...

[wordman]

well let me know if it worked,lol

[jesserose99]

This is lyrical almost. Love the movement.

[wordman]

Thank you for the visit !

[Dead]

I've read some of you're poems. good job

[wordman]

thank you for reading !

[Dead]

welcome .

[MissLaine]

Aww man, this is so relatable to me! I love it. Such heartfelt, pain , love, oh I loved it. :)
Wonderful write!

[wordman]

thank you for reading,i guess i like pain,lol

[MissLaine]

lol, no It's a great write. :)

[wordman]

thank you again