Illusive Woman

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Smooth as smooth can be, words placed just so - affection, admiration in one brief poem. Graphic and video perfect!

[wordman]

thank you emmajoy !

[Workvio]

Wow, so beautifully worded I could almost see her in my mind.

[wordman]

thank you marvin .

[Philip Muls]

She commands the attention indeed. Nice work, good flow. I have a story Lovesick that you might appreciate.

Well done.

[wordman]

thank you ! i will check it out .

[terry smith]

the kiss we miss is the smile in her eyes,,,,

[wordman]

thank you !

[Ayesha]

This is a lovely poem. Great work 👌

[wordman]

thank you for the visit .

[B]

the perfect woman
I am not sure how that is like lol
I fall everywhere lol
and get stuck in the bag zipper lol
love it

[wordman]

i thank you for graceing my page ..

[Zahra]

Interesting imagery. The poem flows very nicely. Well penned.

[wordman]

thank you for reading and leaving your comment !

[Stars and Whales]

This is great. The music fits nicely :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

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This has a wonderful flow, it glides melodically with warm currents of adoration. Very nicely done, Ron :)

[wordman]

thank you lynn,appreciate your visit a woman on here posted a poem with this photo so i got the photo and wrote the poem on it as a surprise,somebody ran her off, she went back to poetfreak

[L. Michelle Corp]

First off, The Temptations are amongst my top ten favorite musical artists of all time. Your poem is short and sweet, just the way I like poems (usually). She's the girl every man dreams of and every woman longs to be. I especially like these words: "she commands the attention where ever she choses to go". Not receives, draws, gets, gains, or earns attention; she commands it. Thanks for sharing.

LMC

[wordman]

thank you for the review,she was actually a poet from here ! she posted a poem with this photo
i copied the photo and wrote the poem