Illusive Woman

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Great rhyme, superb choice of words to sketch the near perfect beauty. Some women have it all.

[wordman]

thank you very much,you could fit right in that photo

[apennylate]

Tremendous reversal of my sense at the end, I was pulled in, then dashed with the reality of vogue. Neat rhymes and wonderful flow... Nicely penned...

[wordman]

thank you silinte,i appreciate your review

[apennylate]

Of course...

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Love it word man very nice imagery in this piece.

[wordman]

thank you benita ,appreciate your visit

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

I've missed visiting I thought I'd stop by I'll try to more even if things for the better change in my life but I'm not sure how much I'll be online. Blessings my friend

[Kathryn Smith]

ooooo Wordman this is really good! Well done my friend. I like the picture.

[wordman]

well i thank you ,for the long awaited visit,lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ron this piece has had more views than I have had hot dinners! Nice tribute to a lovely writer, only wish I knew who this is. Did I know her?
It is a lovely, melancholy flavoured write about seeing someone for their beauty and worth. Must be my favourite of your works.

[wordman]

thank you john,she is at hello poetry,somebody ran her off,not sure if you knew her

[Nadia]

I love the last couple of lines! "soft as silk, sweet as snow, she looks like she just stepped out of Vogue". Wow! She must have really inspired you... And how fleeting is the beauty of a woman... yet you've immortalized what hers meant to you in this tribute.

[wordman]

thank you nadia,she was and still is a friend,

[Chris A Jones]

This piece makes me want to meet the illusive woman.

[wordman]

well she is real,she left w/c over a want to be troll
thank you !

[Chris A Jones]

Sorry to hear that. Guess that's why you titled it illusive.

[wordman]

yeap ,in stead of ellusive

[Ruth]

Ah...wonderful dedication...lovely flow...holds a vibrant energy...

[wordman]

thank you !

[katja]

a beautiful ode...
... as smoothly written as her footsteps across the dunes of your synapses
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thank you for sharing
~ k

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !